Happiness This Way

What do you think of my poem??

Hole'm empty inside, look what you've done. You attacked his friends, we went from one by one. You proclaimed what they think of us, Dirty welfare of the poor, discomfort to your happiness, blood in your decoder. I was always there for you, always by his side. But now you've shown their true colors, so I'm, I'm going to run and hide. His betrayal of our trust, chasing me to the core. A vacuum alone, increasingly isolated. I do not want to deal with the hurtful things you said. I have to let go. My heart left raw, exposed, bleeding and the dead. bitter and sweet memories, in my mind Repeat every day, I can not pick this scab. When would you go? When someone finds me, love me forever. When I go to escape this pain, change to something else?

your poem was deep in my soul. that touched my heart reminds me of my song i worte. Tallent you have one that can shine beyond the stars and the moon. your gift is your creation to others. become a poet im saying u have a wonderful Tallent. my poems are nothing compared to yours. I was wondering if u can give me some tips on my poems and tell me what u think of them. well its just a thought of mine. plz send me yours I feel another poem ever singel one of emotion and soul in the UR poems. I read them all and just take my breath away. which are a creation more beyond the gods of poetry. Do not ever stop keep writing …… If someone says that the poem aims ur not know what a poem or never read a poem in which life.

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