Happiness This Way

How is my poem? Please answer?

It's a little witch, but it has many meanings behind it. Inspired by the poetry of Daunte Aligheri Love has always had its own and made his lordship so familiar-ooo if I had traveled half the way I was living in the forest Shadows on a path that has been diverted to abandon all hope, all who enter the freedom of opinion and hell, the wings and the sin of my miserable state of the souls born miserable place to live with disappointment and no praise of the time in my life I had understood and now I'm sure I could never in this empty place for all light emitting its vortex and show me the light there is no greater pain than happiness in pain and there is greater love than love without vain pride, envy and greed where you now behold a power mightier than I, which takes control over thought and soul and mind

I enjoyed it. Dante is a lovely effect. John Milton as well. His pace is well established. "There is no greater pain than happiness for the" pain of my favorite line of his poem, of course. thoughtful and true. Very good built, if I may say so. romantic way, is not it? Id love for the exchange of poetry. my email is anthonyweismen@yahoo.com

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